Out Of The Deep

We had to Right a story as a practice for are writing test in week four. I wrote a story called 'Out Of The Deep'. It isn't quite finished but it's about a giant crocodile that is attacking a tour boat.

Out Of The Deep

 “Tickets please” the travel guide bellowed, As she took the tickets from a young couple. Everyone now stetted Annabelle, the tour guide started the tour around croc infested waters. “Now some of the crocs around here can grow to be up to 13 Feet long.” said Annabelle as the boat snuck out of the bay. “Will they attack us,” said John, who is from the young couple who came last. “Only if they are bigger than the boat or have a nest nearby, but it’s not breeding season yet, so will be fine.” replied Annabelle. Taking in what the tour guide had said john remembered that the boat is 33 Feet long. Nothing to worry about. Turning around the corner they spotted a 9 foot long croc jumping out of the water, dragging in young deer. In the water there's lots of thrashing a the blood attracts more crocs. Suddenly an enormous mouth swallows the deer and three smaller crocs whole. Annabelle see the enormous croc turn the boat and starts to drive to shore. It’s too late, a croc that must be 39 feet long jumps 12 feet in the air and crashes on the back of the tour boat. People sitting at the back get shoved under water and don’t resurface, but blood does. Furiously swimming to shore People start Follow Annabelle. Struggle over Annabelle leads the remaining people downstream in the safety of the trees. While Walking through the trees they lost someone. Masy was walking at the back and got mauled to death by a jaguar.