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Friday, March 6, 2020

Essay Draft


Food Waste



We waste food every day with or without knowing it top of Strawberries, Brown Bits of bananas, uneaten food from our school lunches, half-eaten nectarines. While making dinners we through out the ends of spring onions, carrots and leaves of lettuce. We all like to go to sleep on a full stomach, so we make more than we need and all the leftover gets thrown out.

Humans waste a massive 1.3 billion tones of food a year. When you put that in a money perspective we waste $940 billion each year. That is an insane amount of money, more than enough to feed the whole world. Countries like Africa are starving and in New Zealand, we have nine sheep to one person then why are people starving all around us.

One in nine people does not have enough food to feed themselves that is 793 million people out of 7.8 billion people. Think about how lucky you are. There are small organizations all around the world trying to help decrease the ways we waste food. We need all the organizations to band together, share ideas and come up with an effective solution.

Almost half of all fruit and vegetables are wasted a year, which is 3.7 trillion apples. Wasting so many apples is unbelievable. Just imagine what 3.7 trillion apples would look like. If that is crazy. Then think about this ever time you throughout one burger it is the same as wasting as much water that a 90-minute shower wastes.

Eliminating global food waste would save 4.4 million tones of C02 entering our atmosphere and that is equivalent to taking one car in four cars of the road. It is amazing how you can do lots of small things to make a big difference in the world.

Overall my final opinion and statement is why can’t we just be better it’s all over the news
It’s everywhere and no will admit to how much we are wasting pretending to be good people while people all around us people are starving.




1 comment:

  1. Hello Ben, It's nice to see some more of your fantastic blog posts. I really enjoyed reading about your(Food Waste Essay Draft) It is very intriguing and the essay flows quite nicely with your story. The facts and the ideas you have come up with make sence and I have to agree some fruits and vegetables I have used I have wasted and now that I have read your story I know I should not have thrown out my food. Have you ever thrown out or wasted your food before? As well as such and amazing piece of writing. I'm not trying to discourage you, although you could have read through your essay again and gone back and edited some of the words, because some sentences in your essay doesn't necessarily make sense. Is this your first essay or essay draft you have written before, if so what were the topics you have completed? In Shaw Literacy we have been watching a few movies and are going to be doing some Novel Studies. Where we have a choice of reading books. I'm going to chose to read about The Wonderful Wizard Of Oz, which is any childrens all time favourite story. Then we have to create an essay and write about the story and Genre. Your story is awesome and I can't wait to see your next few blog posts this week.

    Happy Blogging
    Bella

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