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Out Of The Deep

We had to Right a story as a practice for are writing test in week four. I wrote a story called 'Out Of The Deep'. It isn't quite finished but it's about a giant crocodile that is attacking a tour boat.

Out Of The Deep

 “Tickets please” the travel guide bellowed, As she took the tickets from a young couple. Everyone now stetted Annabelle, the tour guide started the tour around croc infested waters. “Now some of the crocs around here can grow to be up to 13 Feet long.” said Annabelle as the boat snuck out of the bay. “Will they attack us,” said John, who is from the young couple who came last. “Only if they are bigger than the boat or have a nest nearby, but it’s not breeding season yet, so will be fine.” replied Annabelle. Taking in what the tour guide had said john remembered that the boat is 33 Feet long. Nothing to worry about. Turning around the corner they spotted a 9 foot long croc jumping out of the water, dragging in young deer. In the water there's lots of thrashing a the blood attracts more crocs. Suddenly an enormous mouth swallows the deer and three smaller crocs whole. Annabelle see the enormous croc turn the boat and starts to drive to shore. It’s too late, a croc that must be 39 feet long jumps 12 feet in the air and crashes on the back of the tour boat. People sitting at the back get shoved under water and don’t resurface, but blood does. Furiously swimming to shore People start Follow Annabelle. Struggle over Annabelle leads the remaining people downstream in the safety of the trees. While Walking through the trees they lost someone. Masy was walking at the back and got mauled to death by a jaguar.

30 minute writing story

Hello viewers yesterday me two other people (Joel, Ethan) made this story of the prompt quote "He swung the lantern three times and slowly the schooner appeared. 

Pirate Ship Battle of the Great

(1679) He swung the lantern three times and slowly the schooner appeared. It 

was hard to see at this time of night as the fog grew thicker and thicker. He clambered over the sidewalk railing, leaving the child he knew as Jack, alone. Port side rowers, being the stronger of the lot are pulling the boat to the right. “Easz off a bit, Cragdor.” bellowed captain Rhinock while the schooner silently snuck out of the bay, into open water. War machine was anchored on the wreck they just made. 

“Ship ahoy First mate Ron.” 

“It’s the schooner, captain Rhinock has returned.”  

   

Fish Patterns

This is fish at two years and four years old try to figure out how much the fish grew in two years.

The right radio

Our inquiry this term we got to choose is we wanted to do Press, internet, TV and radio. I choose to do radio because I think it would be really good to get points over on radio. our radio station is called the Right Radio and this is our radio recording.

Persuasive palm oil writing

Hello this term we have been working on writing a persuasive piece of writing. I decided to write on palm oil deforestation because I wanted to write more about it from the start of the term. I've hopefully found new information that you haven't seen before.

Have you ever taken the time to look at the ingredients of your shampoo, chocolate and chips. Do you know what devastating effects these products are doing. Palm oil is such a cheap, good marketing product that it is not going to stop as suddenly as we want. As a person who loves the outdoors we desperately need stop palm oil deforestation.

Think about this, all the cheap products you buy. Those products are the biggest threat to our environment. They are probably cheap because they will be packed full of palm oil. Mostly companies like pams use palm oil as their main ingredient.

According to Greenpeace 25 Orangutans are killed every day and 2000-3000 are being killed each year. They are being killed by deforestation whether it could be the fact that they are being taken away and killed, loss of habitat or being choked by all of the smoke being produced by human machinery. 

Palm oil isn't just having a negative effect on land animals. It is also having a negative effect on sea creatures. Since there are no trees all the sediment is running into the waterways. 

Next time you go to the supermarket take your to look at the ingredients in your every do food you use and eat. Do it every day of your life you might just save Orangutans. 

Week eight create 2

Since I had extra time this week I made a train station for another create task. This is what I think the train stations were like in the old days.