I have Rip I have eaten
the pages the plums
that were in that were in
your book the icebox
and which and which
you were you were
Probably probably
Reading saving
on monday for breakfast
forgive me forgive me
they were they were
Terrible delicious
so long so sweet
and no plot and so coldThe on the left is mine, I changed the words in blue and the original poem is on the right.
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